His

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As I took my last breath,
And through absolution,
Wished to let myself off pain,
His vision was the only thing that appeared,
It was then I told him, that I loved him,
But somewhere along the way,
The scars got too deep and his efforts paid off,
Because, I stopped

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3 thoughts on “His

    gdalexander said:
    May 15, 2013 at 10:11 pm

    Even in such a short poem you manage to convey a lot of power. Great work- I will return to read more.

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    -G.D.

    Zehra Jabeen Shah said:
    May 29, 2013 at 3:41 am

    This is so emotional. Good work.

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